Entries for the race open at 3 and there will be a 70% payback for the jackpot and entry's will close after the first 10 run so get there early to sign up! There will be a flyer on my personal Facebook page that is shareable and has the entry fee's and there is NO OFFICE FEE! Dinner will be a barbecue with ribs and burgers and feel free to bring a dish to pass but it is not necessary.
We were also lucky enough to score the Chris Kroeze band and they will start playing when people are done eating and depending on when the jackpot gets done. Please share and invite your friends to help support the cause and if anyone has any prizes they would like to donate for the games or door prizes, please send me a message. I can't wait to see everyone there and end the year strong with one of the last races of the year! Donations are always welcome but not expected!
Alcohol is BYOB (for our guests 21 and older) so please be responsible.
This event is located at 54321 River Street Shafer, MN 55074 where our barn and arena are, there will be signs posted on the roads.
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• Need a stronger, more clever heading - Horse Around With Us at Our Open House
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• "Please join us Saturday October 1st for our open house from 2-6 with dinner and a dance after!" - Join us Saturday, October 1, 2016 for an Open House from 2:00 to 6:00 p.m. with a dinner and dance to follow.
• Don't include the request for donations right away, that's a turn off.
• "We will have a petting zoo, pony rides, face painting and more for the children and a bonfire with s'mores bar, corn hole competition, and jackpot barrel race for those wanting to enter starting at 3." Activities include a petting zoo, pony rides, face painting, bonfire with s'mores bar, corn hole competition, and jackpot barrel race.
• "There is a 70% payback for the jackpot and entry's will close after the first 10 run so get there early to sign up and get exhibitions." You wrote that entries are free, so how is there a payback?
• Alcohol is BYOB (for our guests 21 and older) so please be responsible.
It all blurs together because it's one, bold, long paragraph. Break info up into paragraphs, unbold, and be more clear. This left me rather confused.
Thank you for the feedback, I realized under settings the spacing wouldn't allow page breaks but I finally figured it out. I also figured out the bold text settings and fixed that as well. Horse people know entry's to a jackpot are added and that's why I said the pricing list will be on Facebook but I also clarified it a bit more! :)
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